Design
After sharing the brief and the initial ideas and designs for the Buddy Scheme Brief. Also the research and analysis of the brief was shared. Above show the designs and ideas after the peer review, my partner decided to continue with the coffee cup idea, as this worked well, but try it in a more handmade, hand drawn style, which makes it more approachable and organic, rather than drawn out on illustrator. My partner also decided to remove some of the text, as it was too much on the original designs.
Feedback
The coffee cup one is the most successful, as it represents the university cafe and the meet up well. Also the linking of the letters works well, as it summarises the scheme and also represents friendship in a really simple form. After analysing their own work my partner discovered that the coffee mugs looked quite similar to the 'Dunkin' Donuts' logo. Also the letters of the B and S can have other connotations which aren't appropriate to the design or the scheme.
Conclusion
Continue developing the coffee cup idea, but rather than producing the design entirely on illustrator, try to draw it out then scan it in, meaning the design is more organic and doesn't look so structured.
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